Curso:
B1 - Destiny
LESSON 67: WRITING AN ESSAY – SECOND BODY PARAGRAPH
Writing an Essay: The Second Body Paragraph
Discuss with your class: Writing the second paragraph of an essay is exactly like making a movie sequel. It needs to be connected to the original, but it must present something new and exciting.
"A good second paragraph expands the plot without losing the central idea."
To start your second body paragraph, you cannot just throw a random idea. You must use a Transitional Word to tell the reader: "Hey, here is another piece of evidence!"
If your second paragraph supports the same thesis as the first.
If your second paragraph presents the opposite side of the argument.
[Paragraph 1 Summary: Playing video games can improve your brain because it trains your mind to solve problems under pressure.]
Furthermore, video games can also help teenagers build strong social skills. It means that gaming is no longer an isolated activity done alone in a dark room; today, it is a highly collaborative experience.
For instance, popular multiplayer games require constant communication and teamwork to win. Players must talk through headsets, plan strategies, and solve conflicts in real-time. In conclusion, participating in these virtual communities allows young people to make friends and learn teamwork skills from the comfort of their homes.
Remember your topic from Lesson 62: Fast Food, Social Media, or Dogs. You already wrote one paragraph. Now, write the second one!
Checklist:
1. Start with a transition word.
2. Write the Topic Sentence.
3. Explain it.
4. Give an example.
Read your second paragraph to the class. Use a clear, confident voice.
Pay special attention to your pronunciation of the transitional word!
Listen carefully. Does the second paragraph logically connect to the topic? Give your feedback to the Director.
"I really liked your example, but you forgot the transition word!"
You now know how to expand ideas logically in English.
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